Pickup Line #1

I saw this pickup line from the internet, it seems interesting, so i decided to make it into a drawings.


i notice a few problem:

- Guys right hand seems short and retarded
- Gals lack of butt
- Gals left shoes is out of shape
- Guys left hand too short
- Gals hair a bit ugly
- Gals left elbow out of shape

other than that it seems okie. Juz a curious question to all drawer out there, how do u draw a straight/curve line perfectly?